2021年自考英语写作真题_2021英语考试作文

　　各位学霸们好，今天黄老师跟大家来分享一下上周六雅思大作文真题范文和解析，上周考题如下：

　　2020.12.18真题

Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it’s bad for themself. Why? What effective way can improve people’s healthy eating habits?

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　　真题分析

　　上周考题话题范畴为快餐垃圾食品类（高频！），问题类型为report类型，这类题常见有两种问题形式：

　　-What are the advantages and disadvantages?

　　-What are the causes and effects/solutions?

　　在写这类题的时候，同学们切记不要忘记问题中的复数了，剑桥官网中明确要求：复数问题必须给出多个论点回答（具体解读请戳黄老师之前的视频：剑桥官方解读雅思大作文系列），所以无论是优点还是缺点，原因还是解决措施，同学们都需要写至少2个（一般也就写2个）。

　　同时，对于这道题目，黄老师想强调一下solution，也就是解决措施的写法：同学们切记不要把措施写成口号。

　　✅措施：政府可以对不健康食物价税，用税收补贴健康食物来鼓励人们购买。（下文论点）

　　❎口号：人们应该多吃健康食物，少吃不健康食物。

　　从中文来看，同学们可以明显的发现，措施是一个可以执行的方案；而口号仅仅只是需要达到的目的和建议。黄老师在批改作业时发现有很多同学在写解决方案是会错误的空喊口号，而这是不对的。

　　所以，同学们可以参照一下范文中黄老师写的2个措施，同时注意积累范文中的好词好句哦！（所有词句均摘抄借鉴英文期刊杂志报纸，为地道英语搭配可以直接背诵）

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　　满分词汇/高分段落

　　2020.12.18真题

　　Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it’s bad for themself. Why? What effective way can improve people’s healthy eating habits?

　　满分词汇：

　　draw n. 吸引人的地方

　　on the go 在忙碌中做什么

　　a sheer number of adj. 大量的

　　accessible adj. 容易接触到的

　　forgo v. 放弃

　　detrimental adj. 有害的

　　taste bud n. 味蕾

　　subsidize v. 补贴

　　daily intake n. 每日摄取量

　　原因段：

　　The first reason is that junk food and fast-food products are generally easy to grab and take with people. This ease is a major draw for many, especially people who work long hours or need to grab a snack on the go. The rapid production and easy storage are major reasons why a sheer number of people eat junk food. In addition, cost is a massive component of the draw to junk food, which tends to be extremely cheap. In fact, it normally costs several times as much to have a healthful diet as it does to eat junk food and fast-food products. When junk food is highly accessible, affordable and convenient, it becomes easy to forgo nutritious food. Finally, such food is tasty: although the high sodium and sugar content are detrimental for consumers, they make these foods appealing to the taste buds.

　　解决段：

　　In order to promote a healthy diet, government can increase tax for junk food industry and use these revenues to subsidize healthy food, which will reduce the price for healthy food and hence increase its attractiveness, especially for households with tight budget on food. For individuals, creating a list which tracks daily eating and drinking intake is highly recommended. It is easily achieved today with varies mobile applications allowing users to upload the food they ate in a day and automatically generating a daily sum of nutrition and calories, which helps them to uncover their unhealthy diet habits.